Everything is godly written...

This chapter was marvelous. You provided a real first person view... It was godly written.. nice.

Ok, can I just say that I like Rafe's monster side? Slightly sarcastic and has a fun time annoying/freaking the hell out of Rafe's humanish side. Write faster, I except the next part to be up soon!

(please ...?)

whoa! Awsome story so far.
I think you're doing a great job in first person POV. It made me feel like I was there. Your description on everything was perfect! I can't wait for the next chapter!