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| Pearl Warrior 2007-06-24 ch 1,   | I think I've read this one before too... But oh well! I loved it! Luv ya lots sis, Meg |
| YoungRider432 2007-06-10 ch 1, | I like this alot...keep writing |
| sin olvido 2007-06-05 ch 1, | Ah, yes, I definitely get what you're saying here! High school is terrible -- are you public? But I guess anywhere you go, it's the teenagers that make it bad! "poplars" -- poplars are trees. :) "one’s" -- doesn't need to be apostrophised (not a word, sorry; I try not to speak English this often). "groups" -- should be "group's" because you're contracting "group is." Keep writing! ~Cristina |
| soccerfreak18 2007-06-04 ch 1, | yeah i liked it. thats why i hate high school but what can you do lol good job and thanks for the review |
| Blossom of Life 2007-06-04 ch 1, | I suggest that you don't finish a poem with 'I hope you liked my poem' but it is still really good. I will have to keep a look out for your poems in the future. Thankyou. |