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| Doodleflip 2007-03-19 ch 1, | abuseI love it. It's quite abstract, but you use language to great effect, and seemingly random words all have a purpose. I love when poetry goes beyond words and uses feelings and resonances to communicate, as this does. Excellent work, very vivid and tangible. Well done. Doodleflip. |