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| Aslan Israel 2007-03-22 ch 1, | Lovely! |
| Katja de Wit 2007-03-19 ch 1, | That's really beautiful. I loved the analogies and your choice of words. Though I did have the idea it suddenly stopped rhyming. (but that might just be me) Great work, keep it up! ~Katja |