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Reviews For: The Downfall of Peter Popperneil

AtaEnt
2008-11-24
ch 1,
Very well done, and a fitting end. The only thing left unclear to me was just how intelligent Billy was... because obviously he was smarter than the rest of the village (he knew Peter could not turn away the sun) but at the same time, I wonder if he realized it would make Peter blind (therefore truly and permanently ruining him.

Anyhow, thank you!
Courtney Colver
2008-09-15
ch 1,
I'm a little sad for Peter, but I still think this is a great story. Peter's ending was fitting.
Zakk Mortified
2007-05-10
ch 1,
Wow this story was really good keep up the good work.
SuperbNova
2007-03-20
ch 1,
I loved the way this was written. The only thing I would suggest would make the theme or the moral a bit more obvious. I'm not even sure I understand it yet. But it was gorgeously written.
Mistress K. Darq-Chylde
2007-03-19
ch 1,
Aww. Sadness, Miss Lani! Quite well done for a fairy tale all your own, however.
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