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| Ladys-Fantasy 2008-06-06 ch 3,  | abuseOh! I'm so intrigue but I have to go! So tomorrow I will continue with the story which is great! And I like how you... write. Yup, you write very good, I mean... Is easy to read and to understand (For me that my main language is Spanish XD) I dont know if you get me, but the thing is that I love the story and I hope to finish soon to continue with the sequels. ^^ Take Care. |
| Arein 2007-04-30 ch 17, | abuseA bit anti-climactic but a good read none the less. |
| Ski Aer 2007-04-28 ch 17, | abuseI knew it. Mark was just so, so evil :P |
| Ski Aer 2007-04-28 ch 13, | abuseWell, they don't seem very sad about Mark dying... |
| TwilightRoses 2007-04-28 ch 17, | abuseI like the twist of fantasy and religion. Sometimes the sotry seemed a bit amature, but I found myself liking it. |
| Arein 2007-04-25 ch 15, | abuseSo the professor really was the visitor. Tom was just totally denied. |
| Arein 2007-04-24 ch 14, | abuseSo the professor is a liar? Is the professor the "Vistor"? |
| Arein 2007-04-23 ch 13, | abuseI have a bad feeling about this. |
| Arein 2007-04-19 ch 12, | abuseLet me guess if one has to go alone the one to go will be John. |
| Arein 2007-04-18 ch 10, | abuseHow clever of John. After having read this chapter and the chapters before it I'm not sure how some people wouldn't get it. |
| Swish2 2007-04-18 ch 1, | abusewow matt this is pry the best story ive every read and i told you that mark was the visitor |
| Arein 2007-04-17 ch 9, | abuseI only sort of saw that coming. So is Mark evil or just misguided? Either way is he going to return to the "Light"? If not who will be the fifth Anima-Kupare? |
| Arein 2007-04-16 ch 8, | abuseWouldn't it be ironic if Tom was the hawk. |
| Arein 2007-04-04 ch 6, | abuseWho is the mysterious person? Is it Mark? Very good by the way. Don't let you know who get you down. |
| Swish2 2007-04-03 ch 3, | abusewow this is amazing |