Oh! I'm so intrigue but I have to go!

So tomorrow I will continue with the story which is great!

And I like how you... write. Yup, you write very good, I mean... Is easy to read and to understand (For me that my main language is Spanish XD) I dont know if you get me, but the thing is that I love the story and I hope to finish soon to continue with the sequels.

Take Care.

A bit anti-climactic but a good read none the less.

I knew it. Mark was just so, so evil :P

Well, they don't seem very sad about Mark dying...

I like the twist of fantasy and religion. Sometimes the sotry seemed a bit amature, but I found myself liking it.

So the professor really was the visitor. Tom was just totally denied.

So the professor is a liar? Is the professor the "Vistor"?

I have a bad feeling about this.

Let me guess if one has to go alone the one to go will be John.

How clever of John. After having read this chapter and the chapters before it I'm not sure how some people wouldn't get it.

wow matt this is pry the best story ive every read and i told you that mark was the visitor

I only sort of saw that coming. So is Mark evil or just misguided? Either way is he going to return to the "Light"? If not who will be the fifth Anima-Kupare?

Wouldn't it be ironic if Tom was the hawk.

Who is the mysterious person? Is it Mark? Very good by the way. Don't let you know who get you down.

wow this is amazing