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| Arianne 2007-06-18 ch 1,  | Very poetic, it hits your heart with love but then it can hit you with a sort of excitement. I really enjoyed reading tremble. I hope some day someone can make me tremble. Lol Love Air head |
| Anesidora 2007-05-26 ch 1,  | A very well written poem. I quite enjoyed reading it. I found it to be visually stimulating from the words you picked. It wasn't over loaded either it gave room for the reader to add their own visualizations to it and personalize it a bit for themselves yet still connect to what you were saying. I also found the repitition to be done well. |
| Cheesy Brussle Sprouts 2007-03-19 ch 1, | well goodness that was very well done wasn't it. Nicely done and wonderfully worded. Kira |