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| Otseis Ragnarok 2007-03-20 ch 1,   | Yeah, that DID move fast. A little too fast for my taste. If it were up to me, that would've been separated into three chapters, and each one would've been a LOT more in-depth. Also, you know the meaning of the word 'genkai', right? (It means 'limit' in case you don't) Now, for the rating. A FIVE out of SEVEN. |
| JerseySpirit 2007-03-19 ch 1, | aw, her moms dead, no! but still, very good story, update soon |
| invizygirl 2007-03-19 ch 1, | wow. intense begining. good use of descriptive words but the plot seems to be moving really really fast. is this a prolouge or something?? great story babe. |