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| Fleeting Moment 2007-06-20 ch 16,   | YAY, ANOTHER HORSE LOVER! I ABSOLUTLY LOVE THE STORY, THE STORY LINE IS IMPECABLE! THERE ARE A LOT OF MISTAKES THO. SORRY MY CAP BUTTON IS STUCK, AND I CAN'T TURN IT OFF>. |
| LiL PiNk 9o 2007-06-20 ch 16, | wow that was kinda funny never underestimate blind people and the rest was really sweet Does james know yet? and i wonder if tifaty will try to be mean to her if jake is there thanks for updating LP |
| fantasyrocker561 2007-06-20 ch 16, | lol wow..i really like ur story..its beyond interesting..updadte soon=] |
| KrazyRachie 2007-06-20 ch 16, | oh my GOD! (excuse me) *cough* WRITE MORE! |
| KrazyRachie 2007-06-20 ch 14, | it's beautiful! yay! (don't so much like the gay scenes, but it's not too bad.) |
| KrazyRachie 2007-06-20 ch 13, | yay yay yay yay! but he didn't kiss her! that dress sounds killer! did you make it up or find it somewhere? sorry for all the questions. |
| KrazyRachie 2007-06-20 ch 12, | oh my god! i am so lucky you wrote more! you're terrible, yu know that? stupid cliffies! |
| KrazyRachie 2007-06-20 ch 11, | Partial, absently. do you have spell check? |
| KrazyRachie 2007-06-20 ch 10, | "It's true. You are a very pretty girl with a personality to die for!" that's so cute! too bad it wans't jake. i had no idea paul was gonna be gay. wow. how'd his parents take it? |
| KrazyRachie 2007-06-20 ch 9, | who's benji? he sounds terrible. is he cute? (sorry, but that's a cute-sounding name!) |
| KrazyRachie 2007-06-20 ch 7, | oh,it's cool! so is jake like bad boy or not? i can't really tell. sorry if the reiews bug you (just n case, but i doubt it) and since you said about predictions, is jake the one for dani? |
| KrazyRachie 2007-06-20 ch 6, | Is Carla's hair dyed? and is 5ft 6 short? 'cause then i could totally be a dwarf offof lord of the rings. |
| KrazyRachie 2007-06-20 ch 5, | question? what does te chapter 5 title have to do with the chapter. excuse my spelling, the keyboard's a butt. |
| I Quoth Nevermore 2007-06-20 ch 16, | Great update. Yeah, there were spelling mistakes, but I tried to ignore them like you said ^_^ Please update soon! |
| Mary's.Song 2007-06-20 ch 16, | cant wait for the Riot update! oh, i should probably review for this story, duh! anywho i really love it! jake is so sweet! update soon! |