Reviews for grinding my teeth

stalkerlesson101 2007-05-21 ch 1,	abusethis is a truly fantasitc piece of poetry! I'm really glad i stumbled across this. Your rhyme scheme is interesting and the point is totally in your face. i loved this poem! this will definitly go on my favorite stories list!
lackluster 2007-04-02 ch 1,	abusei love the rhyming scheme. it made my day, because deep down i know i'm in love with rhyming poems, it's just a denial thing.
bittersweet.season 2007-04-01 ch 1,	abusei love the last line, this flows abstractively, and i like it alot.
Tipped 2007-03-27 ch 1,	abusei like this. and i dont usually enjoy rhyming poetry. but this was blunt and beautiful and i loved it.
recycle rhymes 2007-03-26 ch 1,	abusevery intense, but the lack of punctation made it more so. nice work.
Toxic.Industrial.Waste 2007-03-19 ch 1,	abuse"stab me to pieces and say goodbye because a promise not worth keeping is as good as a lie" I don't think I have ever heard this before, but such a great point. I love it. The only thing is the translation from the line "and now i regret" to "stab me to pieces and" seems a bit awkward. In general this was an amazing poem, just that one line. It doest ruin the poem at all, though. Which is hard to do.
whispered something profoun... 2007-03-19 ch 1,	abuseBorgeous. Spectacular. Phenomenal. I love it all. I can't pick a fovorite line because they're all my favorite. Maybe one of my favorite poems I have ever read in my life. Thank you for posting it!