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| ode to a firefly 2007-03-23 ch 1,   | 87...I can't believe you used that number. Seriously, that number has been haunting my friends and me for almost two years now. =\ Creepy! I like the picture this puts in my head. It's a perfect night - bright moon and stars twinkling above, speeding down the back roads. Yeah. Whoo. ♥Christine |
| purplepants 2007-03-19 ch 1, | i like the idea though i feel more description is necessary. eg. (if its a convertable) hair flowing in the breeze, instead of "climb", "jump", the way the car smells, feels, looks, may give more of a tangible feeling. nice. |