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| fallin4ualwayz 2007-11-04 ch 3,   | i love all of them... seriously. gah im a sucker for romance =P favourites! |
| wecouldgoandget40s 2007-03-29 ch 1, | Very nice poem! I don't know if it was intentional, but in a way the poem is sort of metaphoric. It doesn't have to necessarily be a physical encounter. Anyways, this was a really good poem. It can really satisfy you. Good job, this was excellent. My grade for it, "A" |
| The Reverse Edge Blade 2007-03-24 ch 3, | I liked this one! It was sweet! Great words and a touching ending! Keep it up! Is there gonna be more? The Reverse Edge Blade |
| The Reverse Edge Blade 2007-03-24 ch 2, | I liked this one better. It was more the kind of thing I can relate to. I liked how you wrote your feelings towards what he talked about. Great job with this one! The Reverse Edge Blade |
| The Reverse Edge Blade 2007-03-24 ch 1, | I liked the part where you talked about not understanding why that person thought was so great about that. But there were also certain lines of the poem, it was after you'd mentioned not understanding what was so great about not being able to see much or breathe. I felt that the poem got a little too intimate for what it started with. The Reverse Edge Blade |
| whispered something profoun... 2007-03-19 ch 1, | I really really like this poem. The line-breaks are in the perfect places. The content is unique and yet you described the experience wonderfully. I love this poem. Sorry, no suggestions for improvement. Just good poem. |
| Robert Ryan 2007-03-19 ch 1, | This was really good. It was kind of hard for me to read, but only because it reminded me so vividly of my ex-girlfriend. You did a very good job here. |