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Reviews For: The Dead Collectors

C.Sabbadin
2007-07-11
ch 1,
abuseI think you should have gone into more detail on their meeting. It would help round out the story.


It was an interesting prologue and I liked how you addressed them all separately first as individuals.
Noihseret
2007-03-21
ch 1,
abusewhat an interesting story! I can't say I've ever read one quite like this. talk about holding my interest through out the whole chapter. I couldn't drag my eyes away from the screen! I'll be waiting for chapter 2!
CardboardCreative
2007-03-21
ch 1,
abuseCan't wait for some dialogue ;D
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