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| Keith Anthony Power Campbel... 2008-09-13 ch 1,   | Great to see you writing something warm & fuzzy for a change! After so many poems about differences it looks like in your japanese class you finally found some similarities! Having read all your other stuff, the relief and contentment of acceptance positively oozes out of this, nicely done. |
| kloun mannequin 2008-08-27 ch 1, | true friends are like that no matter what, it's a sweet poem :D |
| Beauty From Pain 2008-05-04 ch 1, | I can relate to this. When I was in the hospital, I felt like I was finally accepted. Beautiful poem ^_^ |
| Lady Alera Van Hexis 2008-03-12 ch 1, | Wow. I love this so much. I like how you wrote down your emotions as they came and there was no stucture and at the same time, there was a structure. People deserve kindness no matter what and the people who make fun of people because they are different are disgusting... Hope that everything is good with you... Your friend, Lady Alera Van Hexis |
| rouquinamour 2008-02-16 ch 1, | wow... brought tears to my eyes! It is so important to be accepted, and to know you are loved... wow. Couldn't have been said any better. |
| xDancingintheRainx 2007-05-02 ch 1, | Well written! I like the ending. It ties the whole piece together nicely. Its such a bittersweet poem, and you expressed what you were feeling perfectly. You're very talented! Keep it up! Thanks so much for the reviews! C= |
| Nemonus 2007-05-01 ch 1, | I'd make the lines shorter and separate it into stanzas. You evoke the feeling pretty well and are observant to see that what is comfortable is "But not too much.", but the format is distracting. |
| Yellowierd0 2007-04-17 ch 1, | That's a nice feeling. I wish I could have that feeling. ^^ Nice poem. |
| Lisa98 2007-03-21 ch 1, | aww i like it : ) i can tell you are content with your friends and this poem : ) |
| jojoba-music-girl 2007-03-20 ch 1, | This is great! It's great to have such a feeling. Good thing, good work! |
| sweets555 2007-03-19 ch 1, | i like that feeling. however, unlike you, i have never been able to put it to words. great job! |
| Cruxis Angel 2007-03-19 ch 1, | Nicely written! Very excellent! |
| Katja de Wit 2007-03-19 ch 1, | That was really sweet. =] I like the way you shape your poems, meaning the way some sentenses are spread out over more than one line. It effects the rhythme. Nice. ~Katja |