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| fusionbeam 2008-04-07 ch 1,  | abusewell started a lil different then the others but its ok will this get a update? |
| shadowc 2007-08-14 ch 2, | abuseCongradutions Numinor29, you are the first person that made me get off my lazy butt and review to tell you how much I like this story (besides my friends, but they haalmost force me to do it). I've every version of this, and I have to say, this one is pretty good. I like hoe Rai thought Artemis was some stuck up snobbish person (btw, you really scared me then. I thought you had changed Artemis for a second) and thn found out she barely speaks. Shows that you shouldn't judge someone by what you hear. Anyways, keep up the good work, and update somy friends (it gives me something else to do). |
| For What Its Worth 2007-08-02 ch 2, | abuseHmm...Much better. More holes in his memory, an easier explanation, and poor Artemis! Why did she bite him? And I believe I liked all the girls not understanding but still loving her better. |
| Casey Drake 2007-07-07 ch 2, | abuseArtemis is so CUTE and I love her. She reminds me of my cat Lucy when we first got her. She'd been neglected by her previous owner and didn't know how to deal with us and my other two cats. She still freaks out and runs away when something startles her. When she's confused she goes 'prrt?' and flicks her tailtip back and forth. :) CD |
| Casey Drake 2007-03-27 ch 1, | abuseHnnh... I like it except for that comment of '1 out of a hundred people can cast spells'... do you know how many people that is? Out of a six-billion world population, sixty million people can cast spells. If you're going for a tiny number, one percent is pretty big. Oh, and I cracked up when Rai came up with his instant personality-analysis of Artemis... XDD how wrong he is... :) CD |
| For What Its Worth 2007-03-21 ch 1, | abuseSo, why did it need a rewrite? Not that the rewrite isnt good - I was just wondering why you believe you have to rewrite it. So Rai has formed an unsatisfactory opinion of Artemis? This WILL be rather more interesting. How many pegs down does he intend to take her? |