Well, it's next week... Anyways, I think that this is quite amusing, so if it's meant to be funny, then sure. It's kind of silly, but the rhymes are good and the flow works. Personally, I like the reference to the "Hatikva", but in the way of writing, it's good. The structure is really neat. I still think it's kind of silly, but that doesn't mean it's not good.