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| Carmel March 2007-05-06 ch 1,   | You want criticism, huh? Well, I got nothing :) You blend description with dialogue in a way I rarely see, and it makes for a very interesting read. The dialogue and characters are realistic and believable. You've only got minor grammar, spelling, punctuation errors. All in all, this story is great :) ~carm~ |
| Brighter Than Sunshine 2007-03-20 ch 1, | Mk. Just a few words of advice. I haven't actually read it thoroughly but I skimmed through it. I advise you to go back and change the summary so that the spelling is correct so that it'll catch people's attention more. I'm thinking that people won't want to read a story that has really bad spelling errors and some people might think that it has bad spelling errors in it because of the review...which has bad spelling errors in it. And even thoguh the story might not have errorss in it, people might think that the entire story does because of the summary. Does that make sense or have I been repeating myself over and over? Yeah, but I think you have a very nice start. Keep up the good work :] |