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| WyrdWolf 2007-03-21 ch 1,   | Hee, just heard this at Guild. ^^ I like it. The idea, the title, the point given, and like I said before, the way you sum it all up into the last line. Skillful. I think it could've without 'The “8th world wonder”/That is what these people are considered.', though. This poem's magic is in its subtle ambiguity, so by outlining exactly what you meant by 8th world wonder it kind of took away from its effect. Wolfie |
| mcfly1391 2007-03-21 ch 1, | goodgood |