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| mindOFdeliriousUNREST 2007-04-05 ch 1,   | this is a really great poem. I love the repetition. one thing though- it's "their" not "there". (sorry, my LA teacher's a grammar freak and it's rubbing off) i'm sorry you had such a problem with your family. paz, -the delirious one |