|Reviews for Hazel Eyes|
| simpleplan13 4/7/07 . chapter 1
sad ending.. I like the typing piane metaphor.. and the similie in that last line was awesome
| SirScott 4/1/07 . chapter 1
I liked this poem. The lashes more like spears. That line was the perfect ending to this piece.
| ShadyUltima 3/31/07 . chapter 1
I really liked that. Quite a nice love poem