Es war einfach wunderbar! Du bist ein sehr gut Englisch Dichter. I think you are far better than most English-speaking writers could ever hope to be.

Aber du brauchst commas:
"Forced to the ground,
Still breathing,
Not dying,
Believing."

Auch, es sollte sein (in der dritt Strophe), "Is it me who has to hide?"

Except for that, I don't think anyone could tell that English wasn't your first language. How long have you been learning? Your writing is fantastic.

Aside from the misspellings, it was a great read. I enjoyed the perspective you presented. I think it encapsulates the generalities of being lonely to some extent or rather looking for acknowledgment.

Great job. I hope you do more in english *laughs*.