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| Sukidayo 2007-03-30 ch 1,   | Jesus effing Christ. That was one intense story. I liked how you went back and forth between the two characters and showed exactly how Aaron went slowly insane. It's terrible when someone has to go through something like that. I wasn't expecting this when I saw the title and now I understand the meaning if it. This was well done except for some parts that were a little confusing and grammer things here and there. But all and all, it was really good. Kudos! -SA |