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| The Falconer 2007-08-07 ch 3, | abuseNice story so far, though I don't really like Adam. I was hoping the love interest was Nervy... Oh well, update soon!! Falconer. |
| DRAGONFIRE04 2007-06-05 ch 2, | abuseGood story and can you update soon so I can see what will happen next. |
| Jayn 2007-03-22 ch 2, | abuseI LIKE IT! I really want to know who that is. Hm... Wonder how important that wizard was... I think his actions will come back to haunt him. Please update! |
| SithMouse 2007-03-21 ch 2, | abuseVery good so far. I like Holden. I'm anxious to learn more about him. The end of chapter two was great. Oh, and cute half-demons with cats are totally hot. :D |
| Delayed Epiphany 2007-03-20 ch 2, | abuseInteresting. I like Holden, he's a very likable mc. I don't really have an opinion on Amy yet, though i do like the cat. lol. I have a cat so I guess I'm biased. Anyways, I get the feeling that this isn't going to be the last of that whole wizard thing. Maybe Holden should have listened to what he had to say. Maybe I'm wrong. /shrug/ Anyways, the cliffie at the end of ch2 is done nicely. I'm wondering who this intruder is and whether or not he's friend or foe. hm... Next chapter please! XD much luv shoes |