This is very nice. I have an assignment to find 'a poem with good imagery.' May I use this one? It's really good. ^.^

sounds like a great place @_@
lead me there!

This is really lovely - I thought I might lose interest becuase it was so long - but i didn't, you kept me interested becuase with the range of vocabulary you continued to paint wonderful pictures in my mind. In fact it reminded me of my holiday, which made me happy! :)