That was just... SO SAD!

It made me cry. You have a gift, right there. I just loved the way the whole thing panned out. I think my favourite scene was the one in the locker room (?) where the guys were beating up that other kid, and then when he asked why, the guy just said "I'm gay." Like it was obvious. I hate society. I do however, very much love this story. It made my day (or early morning... same thing...)

Luv. xoxo.
Sure Things Falling.

When I was reading the part where the main character was taking something from his dad's drawer.
And from that point on I knew someone was going to die.
My first guess was right.

Hi!

I just want to say that I loved this story. I cried a lot when a read it, it's really touching and emotional. The way you potrait the characters is really good and believable. I also like the theme, sexuality mixed with friendship. How it's not always easy to please your friends but you do it anyway because you're afraid they're going to leave you, even if it hurts you to the core of your heart to deny the truth about how you feel.

I agree with your comment at the end that it is a better story to skip the clichéd ending, even though a part of my heart wishes it could be that way. But I'm happy that you stuck with your conviction that it would be a better story and it is.

Anyway, good luck with your writing. Hope you can create more wonderfull stories for me and the rest to enjoy. =)

Oh my gosh, even though you said you were weren't going to end it like a cliche, I was still suprised when I got to the end. I think this story is wonderful and like that you didn't seem to be trying to hard. Sometimes people try so hard not to fit the mold that the story comes out stupid and confusing. You did really well!

Wow, you are an extremely talented writer... at the end i was tearing up... and i'm not one to cry easily. Congrats... i think :) hahah. well done. Bien hecho.

Haha, of course they wouldn't get together. A straight guy can't simply turn gay, not even for his best friend. Great ending though.

THAT WAS SO SAD! And very well-written, too. I loved it. ^_^

love ANGST

-claps- Way to go on making a cliche and actually making it good. No, not good, better. That was stickin' amazing! But so sad! Love at first sight is a terribly painful thing...

you never know who the person is...

Or what may happen...

Or if they'll except you...

I loved this alot! Honestly, it's frickin' amazing.

** ** **. You made me cry. Well, I'm not REALLY crying, but my throat hurts and my eyes are watery. So basically you made me cry.

And that saddest part is, that's SO what you wanted to do! You just WROTE that to make the little girls cry, I KNOW you did. You're like, hahaha, I'm so cool, I can write big bad stories about emotional gay kids and not give a damn, and all the slash-obsessed girls will CRY.

Sorry. It's late. And even when it's not late, I'm still psychotic. Ignore me. Really. Just ignore all that, and remember that I thought it was very good. And I think a lot of other people did too, yeah? Well, it is. It's good. So there.

Honestly, though. It's so depressing. Poor guy. Poor Riley, too, I guess, 'cause he has to live with it. But still. I need to go read something happy now... I'll just stalk your profile, I guess, like I do with everyone else's... hopefully you have something happier, or I'll be forced to give up on you.

Good job on this, though.

Aw! This makes me sad. I was crying at the end. It's so sad what happens to him. =(

-Rasko

Man, you made me cry. Thats sad, and tragic...kind of cliche but still...-_-
Anyway nice.Hope you write more awesomness!^^

That was an amazing story. I would have preferred a happy ending, but I guess this is probably a bit more realistic. I think this is one of the first stories I've read that made me actually cry. (I had to wipe my tears away so my brother wouldn't come in and see me crying).

Ah! I just got finished reading another sad one shot and then I saw the summary for this one and I thought it would be happy!!
And it wasn't!
And I'm crying!
:'(

Oh life! It's always so realistic and annoying and miserable, hm?

Can you make an alternate ending to this, where they end up together? :(
I really wish things had turned out differently.