Reviews for The FictionPress Affair

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B. J. Winters 2008-11-24 ch 11,	I was waiting for the poem -- so true...haven't we all been there? makes notes on the A/N I wish FP has these types of directions somewhere. I'm already learning from Rea. :)
B. J. Winters 2008-11-24 ch 7,	Oh, man - if only life we so simple that a crayola box would be the perfect wish. manSHORT -- had to snicker there.
B. J. Winters 2008-11-24 ch 5,	I love the disclaimer in this chapter. I'm only a little way into this, and already I feel a connection with your character. Maybe its that secret part of all of us that wants to have someone to talk to -- and FP can be that -- but it already tugs at me. From: My typing skillz have improved immensely...to other parts of net based life you have certainly captured the essence. I'd actually hate to see this edited. It has a certain, roughness that adds to the flavor.
Zarancids 2008-10-27 ch 24,	That was unreal. I had the privilege of becoming intimate with this girl's thoughts, and then to see everything unfold in it's raw yet intricate form. You could see, feel and smell this girl in your head; she is real. Sometimes her pain was your pain. I'm happy that's she's moved on with her life, and fp no longer is everything she lives for. Thank you for this. priceless.
Lifeless Prophet 2008-08-26 ch 1,	Fantastic. It feels sort of dirty when I first started reading...cause of the repeated "I hope no one reads this" but there is something that tied me to the story. I was completely engrossed in this story. I couldn't stop reading it. I guess you forced the addiction on to me for the short time I had with this story the first time I read it. Superbly done. Humbly yours, --The Prophet--
Duuude 2008-08-21 ch 23,	Jonah and Claire make me sad. I feel sad that she never really got to know them. Well, the real them. Her mother was nothing like how her Nana described her. Especially the way she shot down Rea about her writing. It's pretty sad that something like this would happen. The deaths were especially dramatic. One after the other. They sound like they were really in love. In an Romeo & Juliet kind of way. He went out to save her, to protect her and she ended her life because he was killed. Rea makes me sad.
Duuude 2008-08-21 ch 1,	I'm sort of confused here. Rea is real. She actually wrote this journal and went through everything here...? Or is Rea your character? Are you just finding an interesting way of writing a story? It seems so real. Rea seems so real. I'd be shocked if she wasn't. I enjoyed reading this anyway. Whether it was a story, journal, whatever it is.
Duuude 2008-08-20 ch 24,	Wow. She has great writing skills. She said something about having no skills in writing whatsoever..? Her entire story was a work of literature. I think you would call that a way with words. Rea definitely had a way with words. She deleted her story then? Quit fictionpress... that's too bad. Her life seems so sad. It's funny how she said everything on fictionpress became fake and unrealistically cliche. Her life sounds so much like a story... it's pretty sad that it's real. Anyway, I hope too that she finds this. Look at how many reviews she's got now? I think I understand Claire's problems. The same thing happened to a girl my mother knew. Two people of different color fell in love, they got married. BOTH their parents did not agree with the wedding. They had no one's approval. The marriage was the saddest wedding anyone had ever seen. They were happy they were finally together but sad because their parents did not care enough to show up. In the end, their marriage fell apart and it was all because of racism. Narrow-minded people anger me. I don't see why skin color could make someone so against a person. I say this is the best thing I've read on fp in a long, long time. =)
Slideshow 2008-08-17 ch 24,	This story / journal whatever the heck you want to call it, is mind blowing . Zure, if you ever talk to the author again, tell her she has one huge fan. The best thing I read on Fictionpress. Ever .
Creative Reality 2008-08-07 ch 24,	Because this is in the fiction section I have no idea whether this is a true story or not, but I can easily see how it could happen. Rea's story is all so real, so touching, so amazing! It sort of gets in your heart with each chapter--it even made me cry at the end(and that's rare, really, me crying because of things on FP)! I really wish I had more to say about this, but all I can think to say is I Love It. It's one of those priceless works that will live on in my memories forever and I will come back to read again and again through the years, for as long as it's here. I'm really glad I found this.
dark ma'am 2008-07-09 ch 24,	oh my goodness.. this is such a beautiful story!! its left me in tears.. great job on summarizing, it's edited very well. such a good piece of writing
aiur 2008-07-09 ch 1,	just telling you that i'm here & working on it ;) right now i'm just reading through it & seeing what kinds of impression you make on me, keeping in mind that we've already made contact about what exactly this piece is & what it's supposed to do. so far so good though. you'll hear from me, "formally", tomorrow. -kait
Unhappy Squirrel 2008-06-16 ch 1,	I read the entire thing and before I knew it, it was six hours later. This was beautifully written, so many controversial topics were touched on, but subtly. The whole thing just blew me away. I am in awe.
Gentle. Edge. 2008-03-17 ch 24,	Wow. I'm sorry, but I really have no idea what else to say. So ... wow.
Written 2008-03-13 ch 24,	perfect ending. well done. you've written the perfect story about writing and living. as well as millions of other issues you touched upon, like race, family, etc. I don't touch any real issues or ideas with a ten foot pole. and the best part? you were so subtle. so amazing. I'm glad you ended it here. It was abrupt, but it ended on the right note. Sometimes people drag it on with five epilogues, and that is not okay. congrats on the finished story. I, of course, wonder about who YOU are, now that I know Rea, but I guess that's a mystery. If you do write anything else, would you mind sending me a message? one time, I added a girl to my author alerts list (the first time I'd ever used the feature) and she wrote SO MANY teen angst poems after this that I got dozens of alerts per week and it's traumatized me so much that I literally have never put anyone on alerts ever again. ...Which makes no sense, logically, since I'm asking you to alert me... but you know. I just can't do it. If you forget or don't want to message me if you do write, that's no problem, of course. it's just a silly request. It's now 4:30. I feel better after reading this story. Thanks. Sorry I'm the world's worst reviewer. take care, Written

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