That's just awesome. And so original! You have just gained +20 win points.

So cool.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

O...interesting Briar. I hope you do finish this sooner than someday...maybe when Aftermath is finished? ^_^ They are DVish, and you say that its schizophrenia that turns out to be real? So it's a time-travel telepathy thing eh? I'm loving this Briar, you gotta keep it going...though more dialogue, less er- description? ^_^ Thanks for reviewing the Etheral Trilogy too. ^_^

it is an very interesting concept, but I think yo urushed into introducing the conflict a little too quickly. Or perhaps, for a prolouge, you could've done a little bit from his point of view, and a bit from hers? that might've put an interesting spin on it. I don't know...but I like the idea behind it.