Hmph it's almost sweet.

Sad little thing but nice none the less

Nice, I really like this.

Rowan.

how sad! I'll bet if mister smiley knew all this he wouldn't be smiling.

I liked how every other line was only a few silibles long. the only mistake I caught was "Your too nice" should be 'you're' instead of 'your'.

"But I smile back Because I don't want to waste my pain on you"

my favourite line ^^ that was beautiful! keep up the great work!

Emotion is conveyed well here, and it is concise and well-written. Nice work.

(Typo alert: "Your too nice" should be "you're too nice".)

Fantastic poem. I have to say that I can really relate to certain part of this poem. You did a great job.

very nice and to the point.