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| Deja vu 2008-04-14 ch 1,  | I don't know if you're suffering from a freak case of cryptomnesia or something, but to anyone who's read the original this story is obviously plagiarism. The original is a manga by Satoru Takamiya called 'Program in Love (Koi Suru Program)' and the character's names are Kirika and Konoe. If you're going to be so obvious about copying someone's story, you should at least give them credit for the original in your Author's Notes. |
| MythCreatorWriter 2007-03-27 ch 1,  | That was really long for a first chapter and stuff happened that would normally take a novel.. How did they fall in love that quickly? I know, "love at first sight" but that just met. Not that I don't love Reynard, Eyelyn seems like a Mary-Su, just running away from her problems. She was raised to be married off to someone she doesn't know, so why would she object to it? There must have been an outside force that caused that. The descbition in all was very crisp and vivid, but when the tamer and stuff got involved, I got lost and confused. Did the bear, or whatever, just bite Reynard and no one thought about him dying? Or his pain? I love your stories, but I must say you have to fix your heroines. You know I'm harsh cause I love ya. :) |
| Estelin 2007-03-20 ch 1, | i enjoyed this story. keep up the good work and writing |