Neat format. The last line sums it up nicely.

aw, this one is cute. to be honest though, i was hoping to read something a little dark, because of the word "Revelation" but that's my fault; anyways, this piece reminds me of my Venus pieces i've done.

This piece flowed beautifully and it has an almost magical feel to it. The whole poem just flows along like music. I love it! Lovely job!

I like this a lot. Nice.

Rowan.

I liked how this poem was layed out. It has its own face.

SirScott