|Reviews for The Revelation|
| Setsuna529 6/15/08 . chapter 1
Neat format. The last line sums it up nicely.
| CountLuciferLeviathan 3/23/07 . chapter 1
aw, this one is cute. to be honest though, i was hoping to read something a little dark, because of the word "Revelation" but that's my fault; anyways, this piece reminds me of my Venus pieces i've done.
| xDancingintheRainx 3/22/07 . chapter 1
This piece flowed beautifully and it has an almost magical feel to it. The whole poem just flows along like music. I love it! Lovely job!
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 3/20/07 . chapter 1
I like this a lot. Nice.
| SirScott 3/20/07 . chapter 1
I liked how this poem was layed out. It has its own face.