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| Imortal-Eclipse 2008-04-15 ch 1,   | well, from what i got from the story: uneasy boy-doesn't exactally know if he likes her, is kind of shaky and not ready Prince-thinks that he likes her but might only be a short thing, like in 4th grade when kids thought it was cool to have a boyfriend or girlfriend and went throught them in like a day? he doesn't seem like he would be faithful if he was put to the test Knight-good chance, should get to know him a little more for it seems like they meet, then they go to the castle and never actually MEET this is my interpretation |