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King of Kings 2007-03-31 . chapter 1
Again, rather short, and lacking details on the setting and all...but it was good. Nicely written. I hate dreams like that; they haunt you for hours afterward, unlike other dreams.
CingStarz 2007-03-21 . chapter 1
this was beautifully written.
((i hate dreams like this, where you wake up, know it was a dream, and it STILL haunts you...especially ones about family...))
Lady Rigor Mortis 2007-03-20 . chapter 1
it would be nice if you described the environment more and made it more dramatic. but the way you have it leaves it open to the reader and lets them infer, witch is really nice also. ^.^

overall good! :P
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