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Reviews For: I need you to lie to me

A little birdie once told m...
2008-03-07
ch 1,
Wow. Here I am reading these reviews from you and thinking hmm... If she finds my work amazing, she must not know good work. Hah. Then, I decided to take a gander at what your being has to say. I intrigue YOU? This is so raw and fascinating. You have a natural born talent for being able to so openly express what you feel by collecting words. I plan to check your work frequently. Thank you, for opening my eyes to some amazing works. : ) Faves!
Coveredinblood11
2007-03-20
ch 1,
I like this. A lot.

The only thing I have to comment about is the first line "here" should be "hear".
WMystic
2007-03-20
ch 1,
Wow, graphic, but for some reason, I liked it!
Charmed Melody
2007-03-20
ch 1,
wow, what to say..
it doesn't make you pathetic if this were written because of actual feelings don't know you so, I don't know
but I've attimpted suicide over someone I loved .. but yeah really raw emotion in this poem and you can really feel the need to have *him* lie and say I love you just one more time from reading this.
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