Awwe, I'm glad they're together again. :] Darren and Mia are too cute. :D

I liked the first one a little better, but they were both good. :) I wanted to do something like this, actually. Anyway, hope to have another chapter some time soon?

love it :)

Great oneshots. I loved them. Shame with all the typos in the second one, though.

Can't wait to read more! :)

what happenes to katie through the confession?

I liked them both though I have to say that the first one was the stronger story.
It was sort of confusing having characters with the same name. I thought the two chapters were related at first.

But they're still fantastic. :)

The first chapter is the better of the two, it has a more realistic feel to it, not to mention better spelling.

I absolutely adore the first chapter.

it was really good. I really enjoyed it. It just needs spell check

wow!
that is extremely amazing!
it made me realy happy! :)

I noticed a lot of run-on sentences that really made the story confusing.

It is a good style of writing but the story feels kind of rushed.

Aww...that was so cute! :D

Aw..
This is cute!

That was sad, and kind of sweet.

This story was really cute! Especially how the grandma already knew they were gonna be together from the beginning. XP

I can't wait to see the other versions of this story :D It's a really neat idea!