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Sincerely Kalie 2009-09-07 . chapter 2
Awwe, I'm glad they're together again. :] Darren and Mia are too cute. :D
goldenspork 2009-01-27 . chapter 2
I liked the first one a little better, but they were both good. :) I wanted to do something like this, actually. Anyway, hope to have another chapter some time soon?
veautiful 2008-10-17 . chapter 2
love it :)
aurora borealis 2008-04-11 . chapter 2
Great oneshots. I loved them. Shame with all the typos in the second one, though.

Can't wait to read more! :)
chocolaterain 2007-12-08 . chapter 2
what happenes to katie through the confession?
stoppingtime 2007-10-27 . chapter 2
I liked them both though I have to say that the first one was the stronger story.
It was sort of confusing having characters with the same name. I thought the two chapters were related at first.

But they're still fantastic. :)
Susurrent Threnody 2007-08-03 . chapter 1
The first chapter is the better of the two, it has a more realistic feel to it, not to mention better spelling.

I absolutely adore the first chapter.
LovelyLittleDemon 2007-05-29 . chapter 2
it was really good. I really enjoyed it. It just needs spell check
lucid lives 2007-05-29 . chapter 1
wow!
that is extremely amazing!
it made me realy happy! :)
Kate Ford 2007-05-29 . chapter 1
I noticed a lot of run-on sentences that really made the story confusing.

It is a good style of writing but the story feels kind of rushed.
hilaryjojo 2007-05-27 . chapter 1
Aww...that was so cute! :D
Melisa Massacre 2007-03-29 . chapter 1
Aw..
This is cute!
Water Block 2007-03-28 . chapter 1
That was sad, and kind of sweet.
Kailum 2007-03-21 . chapter 1
This story was really cute! Especially how the grandma already knew they were gonna be together from the beginning. XP

I can't wait to see the other versions of this story :D It's a really neat idea!
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