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Reviews For: Permutations

aurora borealis
2008-04-11
ch 2,
abuseGreat oneshots. I loved them. Shame with all the typos in the second one, though.

Can't wait to read more! :)
chocolaterain
2007-12-08
ch 2,
abusewhat happenes to katie through the confession?
stoppingtime
2007-10-27
ch 2,
abuseI liked them both though I have to say that the first one was the stronger story.
It was sort of confusing having characters with the same name. I thought the two chapters were related at first.

But they're still fantastic. :)
Susurrent Threnody
2007-08-03
ch 1,
abuseThe first chapter is the better of the two, it has a more realistic feel to it, not to mention better spelling.

I absolutely adore the first chapter.
LovelyLittleDemon
2007-05-29
ch 2,
abuseit was really good. I really enjoyed it. It just needs spell check
lucid lives
2007-05-29
ch 1,
abusewow!
that is extremely amazing!
it made me realy happy! :)
Kate Ford
2007-05-29
ch 1,
abuseI noticed a lot of run-on sentences that really made the story confusing.

It is a good style of writing but the story feels kind of rushed.
hilaryjojo
2007-05-27
ch 1,
abuseAww...that was so cute! :D
Melisa Massacre
2007-03-29
ch 1,
abuseAw..
This is cute!
Water Block
2007-03-28
ch 1,
abuseThat was sad, and kind of sweet.
Kailum
2007-03-21
ch 1,
abuseThis story was really cute! Especially how the grandma already knew they were gonna be together from the beginning. XP

I can't wait to see the other versions of this story :D It's a really neat idea!
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