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| aurora borealis 2008-04-11 ch 2,  | abuseGreat oneshots. I loved them. Shame with all the typos in the second one, though. Can't wait to read more! :) |
| chocolaterain 2007-12-08 ch 2, | abusewhat happenes to katie through the confession? |
| stoppingtime 2007-10-27 ch 2, | abuseI liked them both though I have to say that the first one was the stronger story. It was sort of confusing having characters with the same name. I thought the two chapters were related at first. But they're still fantastic. :) |
| Susurrent Threnody 2007-08-03 ch 1, | abuseThe first chapter is the better of the two, it has a more realistic feel to it, not to mention better spelling. I absolutely adore the first chapter. |
| LovelyLittleDemon 2007-05-29 ch 2, | abuseit was really good. I really enjoyed it. It just needs spell check |
| lucid lives 2007-05-29 ch 1, | abusewow! that is extremely amazing! it made me realy happy! :) |
| Kate Ford 2007-05-29 ch 1, | abuseI noticed a lot of run-on sentences that really made the story confusing. It is a good style of writing but the story feels kind of rushed. |
| hilaryjojo 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abuseAww...that was so cute! :D |
| Melisa Massacre 2007-03-29 ch 1, | abuseAw.. This is cute! |
| Water Block 2007-03-28 ch 1, | abuseThat was sad, and kind of sweet. |
| Kailum 2007-03-21 ch 1, | abuseThis story was really cute! Especially how the grandma already knew they were gonna be together from the beginning. XP I can't wait to see the other versions of this story :D It's a really neat idea! |