Jeez, that's depressing, to say the least. It's fantastic imagery though.

A hint: with a rape, you never get over it. EVER. Not even partially, as far as I'm aware. I know you're saying "A part of her never got over it." But it just seems so offhand. It seems like...oh, I don't know...like part of her is like, "Oh, no big deal, I got raped. Whatever." And that's...just...GAH.

...yeah. Well. I hope I got my point across.