 JessieJean 2007-03-20 . chapter 1Hm... The rymhing is, well, you know. Heh. And patterns or flow doesn't seem to go very well, either... But it's got a nice, powerful voice, and perhaps not flowing, cutting in, cutting out, booming almost random things at random times, that helps with the effect of the poem. Nice!
Is this just something you did for a poem, or did your parents not allow you to go to a prom, you spoke up, and then made this poem about it? |