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| Lovediamond15 2007-03-28 ch 4,  | abusewo! go you, i love this chapter, great new charrie :P |
| xxurunbelievable15 2007-03-27 ch 3, | abuseI really like the story and the ryans jealousy...the story reminds me of this show called Instant Star on The -N...But don't get me wrong, love how you wrote it and like the lyrics in it too! |
| Lovediamond15 2007-03-27 ch 3, | abuseo nice one! great chappy, the reason was simple but good :P i like it, and i think ryan is jealous, just wont admit it to himself ^-^ good work |
| kat6528 2007-03-26 ch 3, | abusehaha Ryan is jealous. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| kat6528 2007-03-26 ch 2, | abuseit's funny that she kind of has a childlike innocence about her. |
| kat6528 2007-03-26 ch 1, | abusetruthfully when i decided to read this it was by random clicking. But I'm surprised because I actually like it. keep writing. well I'll just move on to the next chapter |
| makinghistory 2007-03-26 ch 3, | abusehey your story is awesome and so far you're doing a great job. its a really interesting plot. i hope to read more soon. keep up the good work. peace. |
| Imagined Insanity 2007-03-23 ch 2, anon. | abusegreat job on the new chapter! I think it would be a great idea to write a chapter in ryans POV- i wanna know what he's thinking. :) |
| Lovediamond15 2007-03-23 ch 2, | abuseomg that chappy was so good! dont worry about doing the "..." i do that a lot too :P anywho, cant wait for next chapter! |
| Imagined Insanity 2007-03-21 ch 1, | abuseNot much to say, though some of the sentence structure could use a little work and some of the pacing is a bit rough. Other than that, this looks like a very promising story and i'll be sure to keep watching. good luck! |
| Lovediamond15 2007-03-21 ch 1, | abusewow, this is brill! the lyrics were good as well, good job, love the charries :) |