wo! go you, i love this chapter, great new charrie :P

I really like the story and the ryans jealousy...the story reminds me of this show called Instant Star on The -N...But don't get me wrong, love how you wrote it and like the lyrics in it too!

o nice one! great chappy, the reason was simple but good :P i like it, and i think ryan is jealous, just wont admit it to himself ^-^ good work

haha Ryan is jealous. Can't wait for the next chapter!

it's funny that she kind of has a childlike innocence about her.

truthfully when i decided to read this it was by random clicking. But I'm surprised because I actually like it. keep writing. well I'll just move on to the next chapter

hey your story is awesome and so far you're doing a great job. its a really interesting plot. i hope to read more soon. keep up the good work. peace.

great job on the new chapter! I think it would be a great idea to write a chapter in ryans POV- i wanna know what he's thinking. :)

omg that chappy was so good! dont worry about doing the "..." i do that a lot too :P anywho, cant wait for next chapter!

Not much to say, though some of the sentence structure could use a little work and some of the pacing is a bit rough. Other than that, this looks like a very promising story and i'll be sure to keep watching.

good luck!

wow, this is brill! the lyrics were good as well, good job, love the charries :)