 angel953 2007-08-05 . chapter 1funny, i understand this completely
i have days like that all the time...great job i can really relate to this poem
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 Black and White Dreams 2007-03-25 . chapter 1I like it.
I think it's really cool that some people can just take a pen to a piece of paper and an extraordinary poem comes out of it. Poems the make no sense and come just from words we want to let out are usually the best =)
~Black and White Dreams~ |
 Lisa98 2007-03-21 . chapter 1Absolutely Fantastc!
i love it
just the way it is
just the way you let it be
.
discontented, not quite settled words, fantastic!
i love the feeling that it captures that life Will Never
be quite settled... but you have to just learn to accept it.
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 missunknown 2007-03-21 . chapter 1I like it. In a way slightly amusing, though I don't know why. I suggest you read back through it, often poems come from our subconscious, you may get an idea about what's going on inside through what you wrote. (dang I sound like a psychologist...anyway)
Good writing. =) |