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| angel953 2007-08-05 ch 1, | abusefunny, i understand this completely i have days like that all the time...great job i can really relate to this poem added to favs |
| Black and White Dreams 2007-03-25 ch 1, | abuseI like it. I think it's really cool that some people can just take a pen to a piece of paper and an extraordinary poem comes out of it. Poems the make no sense and come just from words we want to let out are usually the best =) ~Black and White Dreams~ |
| Lisa98 2007-03-21 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely Fantastc! i love it just the way it is just the way you let it be . discontented, not quite settled words, fantastic! i love the feeling that it captures that life Will Never be quite settled... but you have to just learn to accept it. i'm adding this to my favorites. |
| missunknown 2007-03-21 ch 1, | abuseI like it. In a way slightly amusing, though I don't know why. I suggest you read back through it, often poems come from our subconscious, you may get an idea about what's going on inside through what you wrote. (dang I sound like a psychologist...anyway) Good writing. =) |