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| Garry 2007-03-21 ch 1,  | What can I say! no words are left that could fill any voids that just arent there!! Its a composition that should be read by everyone that is either military and in doubt as to what support they have backing them up, or by everyone who doesnt lend that support so readily... it cant serve not as a reminder to the sacrifices that are made on their behalf, for they'll never truly understand... but maybe an introduction. Oh and you nearly got my name in it too, which was kind of neat... I mean, come on... can i drop the serious-ness for a short while?? I mean I was almost bullied here! Top marks |
| Wilkem18 2007-03-21 ch 1,  | had to put this in the C2 because it is great. love the whole rhyme scheme, and how the words seem to fit just right. My hat is off to you, friend. Keep up the amazing work. |