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| Taz-kun 2007-10-31 ch 1,   | Hmhm.. I love your writing. :P They pwn, sorry you haven't been getting alot of reviews. I'll change that though. Nice and Intense, keep it up. |
| tsarevich alexei 2007-06-06 ch 1, | I love a lot of your wording.To point out my favorites-- "It’s like being kissed conscious," was definitely one. "Would you capture this hand of mine, Made solely of bones and frost?" -- most definitely another, and the brush your palm against my face vs. kick me back in line part was like warm air and cold air clashing together to make a flash of stunning lightning. |