nice/as/ice

The title drew me right in and I just had to read this one.

"I keep typing words like you

Play piano keys and

I’m drinking in these melodies"

-This isjust so beautiful and flows so perfectly, especially the last line.

"Stupid kisses and lonely wishes"

-I don't know what it is, but this just jumps right out at me. I can feel so much pain and regret in this one little line.

"So please murder me, rip open and divide

‘Cause anything is better than slow suicide

Your hands gently guiding the knife"

-So gory, yet poetic and ethereal at once. This is easily my favorite part!

What a great poem! It flowed perfectly and told its story in no more words than was needed. It's definitely getting a fav from me! *

That's a catchy title

‘Cause anything is better than slow suicide

I agree with that line.

SirScott

Another beautiful piece. Worded perfectly! I'm adding you to my favorites. )

Brilliant job! That was excellent. "Your smile murdered me

But I’m not dead"-my favourite part! Well written!

I liked it alot especially the second line, something about it just got to me.

this was amazingly beautiful. like- so beautiful. i love the swimming in fantasies and the your smile murdered me but im not dead. this was so amazing. wow. like- omg amazing.

okay so just a little tip..the first two lines in this poem dont make any sence.

"I keep typing words like you

Play piano keys and"

they dont run together like...what does typing words have to do with piano keys? you might want to clarify that to your future readers but other than that it was pretty well done so good job.

i very much enjoyed this; it flows very well.

I really like this. Excellent job.

Rowan.