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| Iccle Fairy 2007-08-31 ch 1, | very lovely descriptions, wonderful! |
| de wolf 2007-08-02 ch 1, | very nice, very descriptive. i can almost see the light and the grass. only critic is the title, i didn't feel it fitted the poem. |
| anonymous 2007-03-29 ch 1, | I like the poem a lot. The detail and thought that you put into this piece is evident in the remorseful and joyous words added. But these words are not added too often which is good, because many young writers try to overkill their poems thinking it will makethem sound more like Edgar Allen Poe, though it does not. |