Aw! That's so sad. *tear* tear*

*snivel*...

is now on my favorites.

-Ramen

Such an incredibly powerful poem that hit me in such a strong way, keep writting

A very powerful piece! You managed to portray such a tragic picture in so few words. The emotion is strong and the image is clear. Once again, excellent job! I'm adding this to my favorites!

Very deep and powerful. You showed such a powerful, meaningful emotion in so few words. I liked this a lot! Keep writing!

Powerful piece! It's like a ton of bricks just hit my chest or something... really saddening. But also great.

Really good poem. I can't wait until you write more.

whoa... i have no clue how you gave me a good review. this was awesome. beyond it, actually. favorite poem list!

I like this. Very nice.

(Thanks for the review!)

Rowan.

simple, but it definitely says a lot. there's a lot more beneath the surface. nice work.

i really liked this. i like instead of something cliche like "upset" or "hurt" you use mad...like you are mad at them...it works.

Wow, this was really cool. I just loved the ending. Wonderful job.