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you_no_me
2007-11-11
ch 1, anon.
abuse4 thumbs up to you! Your poem is beautiful. Just in case you are wondering. I got your name from Needa S profile. Keep writing you are very talented.
D. A. Emme
2007-10-15
ch 1,
abuseAww! That's pretty. I love the last lines. I can picture it.
His Mercy's Waiting
2007-09-16
ch 1,
abuseThat's really beautiful.

" 'Parents shouldn't have to bury their kids'/ But Father God had to."

Those lines were perfect. Thanks for writing this, it is such an encouragement. :)
AuthorNinjaEarth
2007-08-30
ch 1,
abuseMy favorite part in this poem was: ”Parents shouldn’t have to bury their kids” But Father God had to. Excellent, excellent work!
Needa S
2007-08-26
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful dedication! Keep up the awesome work. God Bless ya!!
temporality
2007-05-22
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful poem!
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