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| iLone 2008-01-30 ch 1,   | THAT WAS ** AMAZING! ...Sorry for cursing. I admit, I onlyclicked on your pen name cuz it was SO awesome! (yes, I speak French if you were wondering) but if the rest of your stuff is this good, you may become a fave author of mine. |
| smile for the sunshine 2007-11-24 ch 1, | At first I was like "wow...I love my Lord too" ...but I don't think that's what you were talking about by the end...Even so the imagery was loverly. Wonderful, actually. I just wish it ended on a happier note...is this really your belief or just a perspective that you took...or is it not about god at all but rather a feeling...of how tragedy is becoming life...and seems to be the only thing that wins...if so, I do agree...tragedy certainly is taking it's toll but I'll still hold my Lord's hand. I don't know...That's just me. But nice poem. Excellent job. |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-10 ch 1, | Well written poem. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a wonderful day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Aero Faerie Extraordinaire 2007-06-26 ch 1, | Intense. It hits you, what you're saying. I love the image I get with "He fends them off without a sword". And the point that while he is flesh and bone and dying for you, the bullets still last. Loved it. I must thank witchwriter for leading me to your profile. Much love, Aero |
| XxXKristie marieXxX 2007-05-18 ch 1, | Aww very sweet! I liked it. Nice work! Kristie Marie |
| mizu no kokoro 2007-04-22 ch 1, | very intense emotions in this, the imagery was vivid. good job keep writing |
| Puppet of Sins 2007-04-02 ch 1, | ; lol but LUFFALY! |
| Inkspilled 2007-04-01 ch 1, | This was very nicely written. The rhyming, every word made sense and went so well with the topic. It moved along smoothly too, some parts were a little longer than the others, but I barely noticed and it didn't change the poem. I liked it alot. :) |
| Rainpuddle 2007-03-31 ch 1, | Dude...when did you say the calling hours were?? Awesome..just fricken awesome... |
| witchwriter 2007-03-26 ch 1, | Well I don't love you! Kidding, just kidding. geez don't get so worked up about it, gawd(rolls eyes). how is it you find so much time to pop out so many great poems, I mean come on, seriously!! Evil waz here! |
| carousel chorus 2007-03-23 ch 1, | AMAZING AMAZING WORK! Im so jealous right now. I cant write anything. just... wow. ~That Girl you cant shut up. |
| unspecified 2007-03-22 ch 1, | omg that is really amazing. wow...i can totally relate...that is really really good. ! ah freaking mazing. love you... review my new poem!! grr lol becky |
| Icrome 2007-03-21 ch 1, | hm interesting... i like it, i know how u feel as well |
| poemkitten7 2007-03-21 ch 1, | Omg!! So beautiful! T_T Very touching and powerful and emotional and creative and original...and yes, I already, mentioned beautiful. Wow. While you continue to make AMAZING progress, I sit here stumped with nothing to write about. LUCKYY. =] ♥ -Sara |