I LOVE TEE. SO AWESOME. THAT GUY IS MY HERO!

MY FREAKING HERO, YOU GOT THAT?

WHOA WHAT ABOUT PAIGE? OMG! WHAT AM I GOING TO DO?

READ MORE, OF COURSE.

WHY AM I ASKING THESE QUESTIONING IN THIS REVIEW INSTEAD OF IN MY HEAD?

I DON'T KNOW.

MY GOODNESS. INTENSE INTENSE INTENSE.

So really.

GREAT stuff.

love it.

AH

I CAN'T TAKE HOW AWESOMELY AWESOME THIS STORY IS.

AH.

MIND. IS. ABOUT. TO. EXPLODE. FROM. THE. AWESOMENESS.

So good. so good. so fucking. good.

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE

ah

so good so good so good.

Cute cute cute cute.

Tee and Quinn? I love them. They are the BEST supporting characters EVER to hit this story. haha. Whoa. I don't know what's up with me... I love that song you had Tee sing. It was cool.

SO good. I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. Sorry I haven't been reviewing. I feel bad...(i feel a rascal flatts song coming on!)

I feel bad...

Cause I can stand here strong

Cold as stone

Seems so wrong,

I can't explain it.

Whoa. Did NOT mean to start busting out with the rascal flatts. It just happened.

Oh. Let's be best friends.

Whoa. Did NOT mean to say that either.

WHAT UP? I LOVE THIS STORY. haha Okay, I don't know why I said "What up?" and I don't know why I said it in capital letters.

Sorry I didn't review some of the other chapters. I just really wanted to know what would happen next instead of writing a review. I can't really say I found any errors in this chapter. Once again, I love your lyrics choice.

I love the way you wrote this. I truly do. There's a lot of profoundness to the way Aiden and Aislynn interact. I love it. I also positively LOVE the way your music lyrics goes with the story.

I like

i loved this story. i cant wait to start reading the sequel.

bye,

Brokencrystal7

wow that was a really emotional chapter. i almost started crying because they both love each other but they dont think that the other would ever love the other one back. also when aiden called her a bitch... i was so close on crying but i had to remember that this was just a story, well very well writen story.

hope you read me poems and story.

please keep writing,

brokencrystal7 :)

I loved it. There are sentence problems and mechanical errors here and there, but overall I really like the story. I am quite sad Aidan tried to kill himself, and in actuality men usually don't slit their wrists to committ suicide, but very good. I am quite excited to read the sequel.