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Reviews For: Sunday Sundae
In This Shindig
2007-06-07
ch 1, 		That was just simply beautiful. "Hot" doesn't fit this short story, for it was too charming and sweet to be considered such.

And the similies you displayed to describe Sunday... It was clever and amazing, and I can't stop swooning over this piece of art you wrote. =D

I loved it. I really did.
Sinister Slash
2007-04-11
ch 1, 		i want a sundae now ^_~

That was well written and very hott.

...yumy
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