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Reviews For: Bittersweet Calm

Gao Yun Yun
2007-05-07
ch 1,
That was..sick..but wonderfully written...I'm not sure if I should be angry at you for thinking up of such a thing, or be jealous because of how..close...the reader gets to this story, if you know what I mean. The words and plot take hold of the reader's neck and force them to stay until it's over, refusing to let go. If you know what I mean. Heh, wow.
foxdance
2007-03-22
ch 1,
That was haunting, disturbing, and very interesting - everything you probably meant it to be. Good job.
Angel Yuae
2007-03-21
ch 1,
i don't get it... if she didn't want him to see her, then why did she willingly come to him when he called to her?? other then that the story was absolutely haunting... you defined it well... ^__^
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