Simple and lovely. I love your imagery it's beautiful. Nice job.

I loved this. It reminds of of a little child, though I think it could be interpreted differently as well.

The words chosen were wonderful. Vivid imagery often comes with fewer words.

Thanks for Writing,
DeepSixing

This is a great poem, its quite clever too :)

I love this poem!

that's cute. unique.
i really like this.
good work.
keep writing.

nice
short but sweet

I really really love the first line. A lot. Well, I love all of it. Reminds me of being a little kid again, which you know I would love.

very nice comparison, though seems to be lacking something deeper. maybe find a way to communicate why you are that way? just an opinion. keep at it.