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| RazorBladeFae1992 2008-03-16 ch 1,   | Simple and lovely. I love your imagery it's beautiful. Nice job. |
| DeepSixing 2008-01-13 ch 1, | I loved this. It reminds of of a little child, though I think it could be interpreted differently as well. The words chosen were wonderful. Vivid imagery often comes with fewer words. Thanks for Writing, DeepSixing |
| Msllamalover 2008-01-12 ch 1, | This is a great poem, its quite clever too :) |
| Broken Firefly 2008-01-11 ch 1, | I love this poem! |
| smile for the sunshine 2008-01-11 ch 1, | that's cute. unique. i really like this. good work. keep writing. |
| Kerokim 2008-01-11 ch 1, | nice short but sweet |
| Captain Bubbles 2007-03-25 ch 1, | I really really love the first line. A lot. Well, I love all of it. Reminds me of being a little kid again, which you know I would love. |
| purplepants 2007-03-21 ch 1, | very nice comparison, though seems to be lacking something deeper. maybe find a way to communicate why you are that way? just an opinion. keep at it. |