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simpleplan13
2007-04-16
ch 1,
interesting metaphor... I like it a lot.
yui ikari
2007-03-26
ch 1,
This is nice.
B.S. Ha
2007-03-23
ch 1,
I think this is pretty good, except for maybe some punctuation?
It's a sad thing how short haikus are, but they are what they are.
Good job,
~foretpsych
Midnight In Eden
2007-03-22
ch 1,
I think a touch of punctuation would really help the flow and emphasis of this.

Otherwise, a good little haiku.

.:midnight:.
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